batyatoon: (compulsive rhyming)
batyatoon ([personal profile] batyatoon) wrote in [personal profile] khaosworks 2008-05-13 03:01 am (UTC)

Maybe Jenny wasn't a Mary Sue, but she had the same color and smell as one. To the point where I could predict what she would say and do next based solely on my knowledge of the Mary Sue Litmus Test (though not, admittedly, how the other characters would react to her, which was something of a redeeming note).

I agree with you that this could have been a much better story than it was, and for the same reasons.

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