Date: 2005-12-26 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I Like it.

Good climax towards the last para -- makes us want to read the beginning of the story again.

Doctor/John in Brown Wollen Cassocks in a monastry -- it's a comical, yet a serious image.

Well done. "o)
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